Inking the 7 Deadly Sins!

I just finished inking this page. Here are three of the Seven Deadly Sins—gluttony, wrath and sloth—being introduced by the demon Mephistopheles. The scene is out of Christopher Marlowe’s Doctor Faustus play.

Because it’s the 21st Century, I think an audience will want more show-biz than seeing the Sins merely parade across a stage (as they did in Marlowe’s play). I was looking for the kind of energy Robin Williams injected into the “You Ain’t Never Had A Friend Like Me” number from Disney’s Aladdin. Williams’ Genie sings a rip-roaring show-stopping Who I Am cavalcade of all his mighty powers that the animators must’ve struggled to keep up with. Mephistopheles is doing the same kind of presentation here but it’s a dark and sinister one. No kidding, gang—each of the Sins can genuinely ruin us.

I hope I haven’t gone too far over the top—I don’t want to frighten off the YA crowd my project is aimed at.

The weird little background creatures are inspired by Hieronymus Bosch’s painting The Garden of Earthly Delights.

More bad guy headquarters

This is Page One. I’m thinking my opening sentence lacks flavor—too 21st-century. That sentence isn’t doing its job. I need to sweep my audience into the mid-1500s from the get-go.

I like Gothic-style architecture. When it’s uncoupled from religious purposes, it lends itself well to this kind of sinister setting.

Sorry!—here are some Tudors

Apologies! I’m having some trouble working the buttons. I posted here yesterday evening with the intention of making the images easier to enlarge. It didn’t work and I deleted the post. Sorry if you were led here on a bootless enterprize.

To make amends, I post here today a few of the real-life personalities who’ve been dragooned into my story—even though some make mere cameo appearances. At least two of these (Jane & Henry) are by the great artist Hans Holbein, who was Henry’s court painter.

 

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Hey, it’s Holy Week, everybody! So if you’d like to learn more about Mephistophilis’ reference to the busting-up of Israel and the Babylonian Exile, just pick up a handy Bible and read Kings 1 & 2 or Chronicles 1 & 2. Okay, okay, I know you don’t have time for all that. Here’s some quick info about Israel becoming a divided kingdom. Here’s all about the Babylonian Exile.

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Here it is, the first page of Gloriana. I’ll post Page 2 when I finish it—after a few pages I’ll hopefully settle in to a regular schedule. By the way, there is a little ‘subscribe’ thingy further down the page. If you click on it you’ll receive an e-mail every time a new post goes up. Thanks for stopping by. And now…

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